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srca1941 Member |
No new art found, but I thought I'd share with folks here a little project I've been working on for myself. I've been scanning and restoring all of the existing "Will" art from Alter Ego and the All-Star Companion (scanning from that book is a pain!!!) to keep track of it and to have something that resembles a finished story. I've restored (using the editor's corrections) the introduction and I just finished coloring the first page today. So thinking other people might enjoy a look at what might have been, here it is: http://home.insightbb.com/~srca1941/JSA.html As you'll be able to tell, I subscribe to the theory that this story was originally intended for a 2nd Big All-American. Until I get to the conclusion, which has many lettering changes, this page will have required the most work as I had to add the roll call, the head shots, the logo, the title, and change the font of the will and the will's heading. (Not to mention removing stray marks and the editor's corrections/comments.) The second worst offender was page two where I had to move some word balloons. As far as the rest of the story goes, I'm not sure what I want to do. Should I fill in the missing material since I want to emulate a complete story? The only problem there is some new art may show up and completely change what I've done, or at least parts of what I’ve done. Any thoughts? -Steve ------------------ IP: Logged |
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James Friel Member |
Very nice, Steve. I don't know if it's my machine, but the flesh tones come across as a pretty straight yellow. If I were you I'd hang loose and wait for more art to show up rather than trying to fill in missing material. ------------------ IP: Logged |
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srca1941 Member |
It must be your machine. On mine (and my printout) I can definitely tell a difference, and I'm partially colorblind. I just wish I had a better program/method for coloring. Right now all I can use is Adobe PhotoDeluxe (the only function I use that program for), but it has always seemed to do ok in the past. Did you have the same problem with the skin tones on the archive mock-ups I did on DStepp's site? As for filling in material, I'm mainly on the fence because I have some good ideas for recreating the Hawkman and Johnny Thunder chapters. Since there have been no art from either of them yet, I may go ahead and do those just because I really want to use those ideas... (Tell me, what could have more potential for fun than Johnny Thunder having to get to the moon and then bringing back a piece of green cheese?) -Steve ------------------ IP: Logged |
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CMCINTYRE3600 Member |
Wow. Looks very nice. I can't wait to see the finished product. Is there a web page with some more info on this story? Kind of it's history? From reading these boards I've gleaned that it was kind of a lost JSA story. I'd love more information. As to whether to finish or not, I would say that it might be interesting, but what you might want to do would be to note which pages and which parts are original and which are new interpretations, just so that if someone wanted to see only the pages as were originally finished they could simply skip over the pages with, say, an asterix next to it. That way you could sort of have the best of both worlds. You could have an archival sense of history there, and then just for fun have a finished JSA story. IP: Logged |
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Owen Cardiff Darcy Member |
Great job, Steve! I say finish it. If new art turns up later, you can always revise the story, incorporating the newly discovered art. IP: Logged |
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profh0011 Member |
WOW!! Has Roy Thomas seen this yet? It's funny, it actually crossed my mind to scan the pages in and assemble them in order, just so I could read it, but you've gone a lot further than that. I know what you mean about the ALL-STAR COMPANION. I'd tried the same thing with the Jack Kirby PRISONER story, but some of the pages only appeared in THE COLLECTED JACK KIRBY COLLECTOR. (It just grates on me that they keep putting out collections of the magazines, but INSIST on added new pages-- trying to "force" fans into buying them, even if they have the separate issues.) Yes, the tones are yellow. If you can use CYMK color, try this: 0 15 15 0 (light skin tone) IP: Logged |
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srca1941 Member |
Thanks! PhotoDeluxe is nowhere near advanced enough to let me enter color values (at least not that I've seen), but I used one of my other (better) programs to get what I hope is a more realistic skin color. I've also changed what I mistakenly thought to be the moon, to be what I assume it really is, the sun. Tell me what you think (it's a different account, so you can still look at the old yellow tone linked above to compare): http://home.insightbb.com/~crimebusters/JSA.html If this new version is better, I can make the new color one of my choices in PhotoDeluxe. And no, I haven't shown this to Roy yet. I need to e-mail him some All-Star house ads, and I'll send him the link to this when I do. I'll also see if I can get his permission to post the available material online for all to enjoy. As an unpublished work it should be in the public domain after the recent Supreme Court ruling, but Roy was the one who made it available to everyone, so it's only right that I get his approval first. -Steve ------------------ IP: Logged |
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Dr. Van Thorp Member |
Do you have higher resolution master images of these pages? I'd like to print them on newprint so that I can delude myself into thinking that I have an actual rare, golden-age comic. Also, the white areas are kind of intense, and I think that the limited golden-age color palette looks better with cream-colored paper. IP: Logged |
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Michael Bise Member |
Wow, Steve! Keep it up! ------------------ Michael IP: Logged |
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KryptoSuperDog Member |
Good job! The skin tones were much improved the 2nd time 'round. I think you should go for it and color the whole book. I don't understand what you mean about restoring the missing pages, though. Do you mean you're going to write and draw them? Questions : does anyone know if DC has any plans to print the lost issue in the Archives? Is it true there was another "lost" JSA story, as well? IP: Logged |
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outpost2 Member |
Very nice work, Steve. I'm impressed! Hopefully Roy won't have a problem with your posting of the artwork. And I do believe you are right, this work was unpublished and therefore should have become public domain as of January 1st, 2003 (unless TwoMorrows' book copyrights it for DC, which I don't think it does). I had scanned in the panels myself and made up my own little comic (and you're right, it is a pain). I realized that one of the Atom tiers was in the wrong place in "The All-Star Companion". Follow the links below for that section of the story to see what I mean. If you're curious about my reasoning, I'd be happy to explain my logic. Can't wait to see the rest of the colorized artwork! IP: Logged |
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srca1941 Member |
OK, in order: 1)Yes I keep master files, these all scanned at 300 dpi, but it takes a little while to color each page so I don't know when they'll get done. 2)Yes, restoring the lost work would mean rewriting and drawing it. Naydel's Flash and JSA are easy to emulate (and it's much more fun to draw in his style that look at it), but I haven't tried the other styles yet. Stan Aschmeier seems to be another easy/fun one to copy, so Dr. Mid-Nite and Johnny Thunder shouldn't be too hard. Paul Reinman and Jon Kozlak will be the harder ones to emulate. However, once I catch up to that point in the Archives and study their work a little more, it may be easier. I see some things in Kozlak's work that reminds me a little of my own. That should make it a little less difficult should I decide to complete the story. As for Hawkman, I'm not too familiar with Kubert's GA work and not sure I'd even want to try and copy it. If I do recreate Hawkman's chapter, it'll likely be in either Kozlak's style, or a simplified version of my own. 3)DC has no plans to ever reprint, or rather print this story for the first time. As for the other missing JSA stories, here are the current theories (along with my own). If you want them expounded upon, perhaps someone else can help you (it's late and I'm getting tired), or you can track down a copy of All-Star Companion (which I really recommend!!!): A)"The Emperors of Japan" This is thought to have been like "This is Our Enemy!" from All-Star #24. Fox's records show he was paid for the script in July 1945. In August, the bomb was dropped, the Soviet Union joined the war, and Japan surrendered. The story was obsolete. In my opinion, if any art for this was even produced, it was minimal. B)"Peril of the Paper Death" We have no clue as to what this story could have been about, but Jerry Bails is of the opinion that the title was changed (and the story may also have been) to become "The Paintings That Walked the Earth" from #28. C)"The Men of Magnifica" Like the last one, nothing is known about this story, but also like the last one, it may have seen print in a different form. "Five Drowned Men," the story that Superman and Batman appeared in (#36). It seems to be in the Fox style, and John Broome wasn't sure if he wrote it or not. The theory is that it was a Fox script, and Magnifica was the original name of the University in the story. It was just rewritten (possibly by Kanigher, but he vehemently denied it). In the end, it's all just speculation, but in my opinion, it's quite logical. Unless the last two stories never went beyond scripting, how is it that we have so much art for "The Will of William Wilson" and none for these? Surely if they were produced and just scrapped, SOMETHING would have survived. Besides, four unused stories, that DC paid for mind you, seems a bit much to me. 4)I see the logic behind your Atom theory Outpost. Good detective work old chum (I say in my best Adam West voice), I wouldn't have noticed it had I not been looking. As Roy has it in The All-Star Companion, the thug with the wide nose doesn't have his burnoose in the first panel of the second tier on the page these are printed on, yet in the first panel of the third tier, Atom is ripping it off. And since the thugs get the better of Atom by the third panel, the second tier on that page has to be from a second fight. Afterwards, Atom and the girl seem to be tracking down the pair using the burnoose. They find them, and the second fight occurs. I'm sure Roy will be interested to see this if he hasn't found it out for himself yet. Finally, Roy says that he has the tiers at the bottom of page 2 and the top of page 3 of the Flash chapter, but couldn’t print them for legal reasons. Have they been printed elsewhere? If so where, and could someone scan them for me (300 dpi please)? -Steve ------------------ IP: Logged |
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profh0011 Member |
With nearly the entire story coming together like this, DC is foolish not to want to print it, whatever their reasoning. How many music albums are reissued with "new, unreleased tracks!!!" as part of their selling point?? DC needs to come into the 20th Century... (no, that's not a typo-- heehee) "Legal reasons"? Did Roy even try explaining that in English? (sigh) Meanwhile... you know, everybody raves about Photoshop, but apart from a few things so far, I can barely make heads or tails or it. I've been coloring comic-book pages with COREL DRAW. It's a "vector-based" drawing program, which allows you to create "shapes", which means coloring an area is like "cutting screens" electronically. TEDIOUS-- but I've been getting lots of compliments for the results. (It's amazing when you just stick with any program long enough to be able to push it to its extremes-- and still have time for subtlety and restraint.) IP: Logged |
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outpost2 Member |
quote: Yes, they were reprinted in one of the Alter Egos (I'll have to look up which one). I scanned it in, but off-hand don't know the DPI that I used. I'll re-scan it if need be. Do you scan using grayscale or black-and-white? Also, regarding the Atom story, in addition to the visual clues you found, there are others. For instance, the girl takes the Atom to a market known for its carpets, then Atom uses a carpet to catch one of the criminals. IP: Logged |
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Duglis Member |
Steve asked: Should I fill in the missing material since I want to emulate a complete story? The only problem there is some new art may show up and completely change what I've done, or at least parts of what I’ve done. Any thoughts? Steve, go for it! I'd look forward to it! IP: Logged |
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Duglis Member |
It would be nice to see new stories in the same style and format as the old JSA stories..not stories like the all star squadron or revamped stories with 2003 story telling. It would be fun to see maybe DC print 12 issues..one a month for next year...(sort of like Marvel did with the Fantastic Four in Kirby style a few years ago)..anyway..12 issues of The Golden Age JSA in the style of the JSA from the era of Archives 8. That would be a fun 12 issues..oh and they'd have to be around 40-50 pages ![]()
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profh0011 Member |
"Yes..you should fill in the missing material with your own creativity or ask someone for story idea help if you only want to illustrate." Or, you could just go the DOCTOR WHO route, and have an editor stand there and EXPLAIN what was missing. (Anyone familiar with the BBC's "trashing" of old TV shows in the mid-70's that were deemed to have "no more potential resale value" will know what I'm talking about-- there are around 150 episodes of WHO alone that are missing, Lord knows how many other pieces of British TV history were also needlessly WIPED due to a monolithic beauracratic F***-up.) IP: Logged |
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KryptoSuperDog Member |
Well, I think you should plot and draw the missing chapters yourself, then. And I think DC's nuts if they don't collect all your work and publish it as a "Lost" JSA Annual one of these days. And don't forget to bump this thread whenever you've completed some more pages! Another question: Why was the "Will" story never published in the first place? (I never seem to find copies of Alter Ego, etc., and so I miss out on all this stuff...) IP: Logged |
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srca1941 Member |
Nobody knows EXACTLY what the story is behind "Will," but the theory I find most plausable is it was written for a second Big All-American Comics Book when DC/AA split. When AA was sold back to DC the idea would have been nixed. A note on the top of the splash page indicates it was then schedualed for All-Star #31, but a proofreader made note that it was 48 pages (too long for the time), and it was killed. Outpost: Thanks for the scan offer! I scan in color and then convert to grayscale. Black and white makes for too rigid of an image, and lighter lines can vanish. If you can dig up the issue of Alter Ego those tiers appeared in, I'd greatly appreciate it! One of the Green Lantern tiers was in AE #2, so that would be the first place I would look. (I didn't get it until #12, and have just been buying regularly recently.) As for completing the story, I'm still thinking about it. I'll finish coloring the existing art and then make up my mind about what to do about the rest. -Steve ------------------ IP: Logged |
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Astronaut Jones New Member |
This is awesome stuff! Great work... Very interesting... IP: Logged |
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whoswhoz New Member |
quote: The "legal reason" was that DC wouldn't let him print that many pages of art from the same story in one place, stating that it exceeded "fair use". I'm pretty sure DC does not consider this story to be in the public domain. IP: Logged |
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James Friel Member |
Of course it isn't in the public domain--since it's only now being printed, even fragmentarily, there hasn't been time for the copyright on it, which is brand new, to expire. In fact, I'd think that any part of it which hasn't ever been printed at all isn't copyrighted yet. The characters are still covered by DC's trademark protection, of course. IP: Logged |
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outpost2 Member |
quote: You're right about it not being in the public domain, wrong about it not being copyrighted. The way it works now, copyright automatically begins when the work is created, not published. I copied the following paragraph from the U.S. Copyright web site http://www.copyright.gov/circs/circ1.html . There are other sections which further discuss the copyright of unpublished works. "Works Originally Created before January 1, 1978, But Not Published or Registered by That Date - These works have been automatically brought under the statute and are now given federal copyright protection. The duration of copyright in these works will generally be computed in the same way as for works created on or after January 1, 1978: the life-plus-70 or 95/120-year terms will apply to them as well. The law provides that in no case will the term of copyright for works in this category expire before December 31, 2002, and for works published on or before December 31, 2002, the term of copyright will not expire before December 31, 2047." IP: Logged |
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James Friel Member |
Thanks, outpost. IP: Logged |
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outpost2 Member |
No problem, Mister F. srca1941, check your Yahoo mail. IP: Logged |
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